I don't think this is all that great , the typo is horrible from my point of view too big. Try something more subtile. Let the background blend in more , or stand out more , what you did is none of both. Sorry but i have to give this critique since your other pieces kickass. Maybe a bad day i don't know... but i think you did better. But hey we all have baddays sometimes things work out well sometimes don't
this is really a great idea, techinally im not sure that you need the supporting text at the bottom of each frame, or maybe the size is too big or something, it kind of distracts me from the beatiful imagery that this piece is really about. I like it alot! just trying to throw my two cents atcha.